Construction quality in China
With the development of economy and the progress of society, a lot of constructions are built in rural and urban regions, such as new houses, high offices, long highways etc. nowdays, people very pay attention to the construction quality. While there are many construction is very inferior. The reasons as follows:
Firstly, some people are only pay attention construciton quantity, not pay attention to constrcton quality. Secondly, to attain more money, some mercherts of construction often reduce some material in the course of building. Thirdly, government can not effective manage the market of construction.
To effective control the sonstruction quality, we must take effective measures to solve the problem. For one thing, people not only pay attention to the sonstruction quantity, but also pay attention to the contruction quality. For another,  the mercherts of construction should be educated to improve their awareness of quality. Last, government at all level should establish rules to manage the market of construction. Only by take these measures, can we improve the construction quality.

你们的每一次改动，对我都是一次进步，考试就是多得一分．．．谢谢呀

第一句中：何为high office ? 第二句首nowdays 是不是应改为Nowadays;
算了哥们，我按你的文章重写一下 可能还不如你写的，也请你改正
With the development of economy and progress of society, alot of constructions have been
built in rural and cities, such as apartment building, office building,highways etc.Nowadays,
people more and more pay attention to the construction's quality ,while the building's quality
more and more inferior. the reasons as follows: first,some constructor are only pay attention
to the benefit ,not pay attention to the quality of the builbings.second,some construtor reduce the material in the course of building for great benefit.finally, the effective measures
have not been taken  by goverment in the market of construction.
It is high time that effective measures were taken to solve the problem of the building's quality.For one thing,people should not only pay attention to the benefit ,but to the construction quality as well. in addition,constructor should be educated to improve their responsibility for people.last, the rules should be established to protect the consumer.
Only in this way , can we sole the problem.

看了你的作文，感觉还是你利害，，，基础比我好，高我一个档次．．．．不过不见什么骑士帮我们看呢？？

可能是忙吧，我有个问题 也没有得到答案

哪个问题没有回答呀，你可以再给我发一下好吗，可能是落下了。

[ 本帖最后由 暴风雨骑士 于 2008-4-2 15:26 编辑 ]

Construction Quality in China
With the development of economy and the progress of society, a lot of constructions are built in rural and urban regions, such as new houses, high offices, long highways etc. Nowdays, people pay  much attention to the construction quality. While there are many constructions whose qualities are very inferior. The reasons are as follows:
Firstly, some people are only pay attention to construciton quantity, not pay attention to constrcton quality. Secondly, to earn more money, some mercherts of construction often jerry-build in the course of building. Thirdly, the government can not effectively control  the market of construction.
To effectively guarantee the construction quality, we must take effective measures to solve the problem. For one thing, both quality and quantity are important. For another,  the mercherts of construction should be educated to improve their awareness of quality.  At last, governments at all level should establish rules to regulate the market of construction. Only by taking these measures, can we improve the construction quality.

你的这篇文章写的很好，只是尽量注意一些语法错误和拼写错误。

谢谢老师,我也总是想避免错法错误和拼写错误,可是在写的过程中自然出现...可能是基础比较差,以前是写错了,总是以为对,老师一
看指出才知道又错了,,看来,作文还是要第三者看看改改才有进步的

没关系，发现自己的不足就是进步，学习自己不会的才会进步。继续努力！！