笨鸟先飞，按照考试时间写了一篇作文，大家帮我看看，不要见笑哈，帮我指出其中的错误，并提出修改的意见哈．．．最后的一段时间里想博一把．

Super-highways in China
With the development of economy and progress of society, more and more super-highways have been constructed in China,especially in developed regions in China, such as GuangDong province, FuJian province and so on. Recent studies indicate that the number of super-highways have been more increasing 15% in 2007 than that of 2006.
Super-highways can provide a lot of conveniences. The convenience as follows. Firstly, super-highways can spare much time. For example,  it take about four hours to arrive Tianjin city form Beijin ago. But nowadays it only take about one hour to arrive Tianjin form Beijin through super-highways. Important, super-highways can develop development of economy and people’s living level. Thirdly, it can associate different regions and strengthen collective economic mark.
All in all, I think that there are more and more highways will be constructed in China with development of economy. It is very imperative to every one to devote oneself to construct super-highways.

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没有人响应呀?我顶顶....

不错 不错，我要是能到这水平估计就能过啦

还是没见到人指出我的错误呀．．．．我再顶顶

看来大家都很忙呀,都没有时间来讨论的呀

Super-Highways in China
With the development of economy and progress of society, more and more super-highways have been constructed in China,especially in developed regions, such as GuangDong province, FuJian province and so on. Recent studies indicate that the number of super-highways has been more increased by 15% in 2007 than that of 2006.
Super-highways can provide a lot of conveniences. The conveniences are as follows. Firstly, super-highways can spare much time. For example, it took about four hours to arrive at Tianjin city from Beijin before. But nowadays it only takes about one hour to arrive at Tianjin form Beijing through super-highways. Importantly, super-highways can develop the economy and improve people’s living level. Thirdly, it can associate different regions and strengthen collective economic mark.???
All in all, I think that there are more and more highways that will be constructed in China with development of economy. It is very imperative for everyone to devote himself to construct super-highways.

谢谢老师,,真的,还有很我的语法错误和常识错误的呀,,,,