翻译的很好，应该可以拿到8分。
Recently,one investigation indicates that the resources of electricity or water consumed in most of the buildings in China, no matter for office or residential purpose, are far more than that of the developed countries.
For example,the average consumption of Beijing residents is three times as much as that of the families from the north Germany where the climate is similar with  that in Beijing.
Because China is a country which is short of energy, we must save our resources so as to enssure the sustainable develeopment of our country's economy.

assure和ensure这两个词都是“保证”的意思，assure是“向某人保证”(make someone confident)的意思，而ensure是“保证上，确定”(make certain)的意思
例1：I want to assure you that nothing will go wrong tomorrow．
例2：1 want to ensure that nothing will go wrong tomorrow．

[ 本帖最后由 暴风雨骑士 于 2008-5-4 14:50 编辑 ]

因为一些技术上的问题，不能用其他颜色给大家修改。回头我问一下技术，希望让大家看的更明了。

翻译的不错，应该可以拿到8分。
1 The civil-war made their business depression.
2 China is abundant in water, grassland and mountains which have considerable potential to exploit.
3 The development and progress of China are benefitial to human civilization.
4 That mastering the needle-treatment is not an easy thing and needs great effort..
5 20-years-experience told me that practice makes perfect.

看了老师精准到位的批改与众学友优秀的表现，使我觉得自己想很顺利地通过考试，苦功还是要继续下的。谢谢老师。加油！各位考友，有信心咱们一起度过难关吗？！

Civial war let their bussiness despress.

The resource of water,grass and monutains is abound,and the potentaion is very large.

The development of china is benifit for civilization the of mankind.


It is not easy to mast the pountial and the hard working must be take.

The twenty years practices tells us:
practices makes perference.

大约可以得到5.5-6分。你这次没有用心做。希望下次做的更好一些。
1.Civial war let their bussiness despress. Depress vt: 使萧条，如：The drought depressed the country.所以在这里不合适。
2.The resources of water,grass and monutains are abundant,and have the great potential for exploitation.
3.The development of China is benefitial to the civilization of mankind.
4.It is not easy to master acupuncture and great effort must be taken.
5.The twenty years’experience tells us: practice makes perfect.

practice make perfect!!!

一直以为您没有给我回复呢，发现有第二页，才看到．
谢谢您！
希望今年顺利通过考试．
加油！我们大家今年一定能渡过难关！