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骑士 老师 我模考三的作文 是不是 跑题了?

骑士 老师 我模考三的作文 是不是 跑题了?

Nwadays, with the development of technology and the progress of society, an increasing number of people come to pay attention to the 3G mobil, witch can facilitate our life, so many people want to buy one.
        there are a variety of reasons for this phenomenon. in the first place, besides talking, it can offer us various exciting functions, such as net tv, cameras, recorder, internet etc.In the second place, we can see each other, while we are talking through the 3G mobile. In the final place, sine the 3G mobile through a powerful ways to transmit the signal, so we can talking about private or business thing safely.
        From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusions that the advangtage of 3G mbile outweigh the advangtage of the traditional mobile. It is high time that an action were taken to buy a 3G mobile.

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是跑题了,而且你的三段似乎观点不太一致。拼写错误也不少,希望是打电脑的缘故。建议你在写作之前自己先打个草稿,如果时间不允许的话,也要打个腹稿。

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谢谢骑士老师!看来还要按照模板扎扎实实地写啊

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