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骑士老师: 我的作文是不是跑题了?(模考情况汇报)

骑士老师: 我的作文是不是跑题了?(模考情况汇报)

骑士老师:

       模考三得41.5   模考四得38.5  模考五得51.5
阅读超惨!    模考四的阅读只得8分!  搞不清什么原因?

另外:  模考三的作文,除了错误外,是不是有点跑题?  以上骑士老师指教
      Nwadays, with the development of technology and the progress of society, an increasing number of people come to pay attention to the 3G mobil, witch can facilitate our life, so many people want to buy one.
        there are a variety of reasons for this phenomenon. in the first place, besides talking, it can offer us various exciting functions, such as net tv, cameras, recorder, internet etc.In the second place, we can see each other, while we are talking through the 3G mobile. In the final place, sine the 3G mobile through a powerful ways to transmit the signal, so we can talking about private or business thing safely.
        From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusions that the advangtage of 3G mbile outweigh the advangtage of the traditional mobile. It is high time that an action were taken to buy a 3G mobile.

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我和你的成绩完全一样

我和你的三次成绩完全一样,不知道真正考试时如何

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模考四的阅读我也只得了9分,没想到会这么惨!哎,加油吧,充分利用这几天吧!

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你们的成绩是一卷还是还是总的成绩啊?

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你们的成绩都不错啊,我三才39分,我(三)作文套的是"when  it  come  to  say   ....."那个模板,是不是应该也可以啊,我看大家好象没有用那个的,心里七上八下的.

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