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      National Characteristics Brought about by the Heavy Snow Disaster

All of us know that it bring us too much disaster by the heavy snow disaster at the beginning of 2008,especially for the sounthern people in china. Which made too many railway and road destroyed,a large number of houses collapsed, therefore, quanlity of people were there home, and the people who were in statation to go home for spring festival were stopped for along time, in addition, the disaster lead to the price of daily necessities rapid growth, the most important is that there are great number of people died because of the heavy snoe disaster.
          However, we can clearly see that national characteristics brought about in this disaster, so many people from all over the word went the disaster area to try their best, some took much money, daily necessities, others helped to make sure the people in danger live normally as before as soon as possible. Amolst everyone in china contribute his money to the disaster area, and to our most respect, lots of people helped others nomatter how the difficult was, as a result, a few among whom were died, just because of the brave behavior and respective spirit , we have beated the disaster easily, in a word, it is our national characteristics

请问骑士老师，我的作文，大概可以得多少分？ 不足之处恳请老师提出，不胜感激。

请问骑士老师能给出范文么？

我们陕西考试推迟了。唉，还得继续学习

老师,题目的意思是:雪灾反映的民族特征吗?不太理解...

What kind of attitude  will  we choose when facing  to difficulty, giving off or overcoming it hand in hand? The heavy snow disaster taken place in china in early 2008 broung about a good reply . It was seen that the government and the people in china have a confidence and courage to rebuild the household.
         It is well-known that  there is  increasing power ,there are increasing numbers. Everyone should support their owner, such as money, clothes, food,strengh and so on,to help those who need help. What's more, the govenment also should establish the system of subsistence allowance for those who suffered natural disaster.
           From can be seen above, all people in this social should love and help each other,encourage each other,particularly facing difficulties,such as natural disaster and disease.
老师,这样写是不是有些跑题或者没有展开来阐述?这种题是否是关键词解释题,但与之前老师给的模板很难套,那就在考试时自己任意发挥还是有章可循?记得老师曾反复强调过作文切忌自我发挥,那该怎么办?碰到无法套模板的?先谢谢老师了!

我是四川地区考生,考试推迟,以前说网络课有效期为5月25日,请问老师我的网络课有些还没听,是不是可以延期?

总的来讲，写的不错，注意一些语法错误。最好三段, 可以得到9分。   
All of us know that the heavy snow has brought us too much disaster at the beginning of 2008 in the southern part of China. Which made too many railways and roads damaged, a large number of houses were collapse. Therefore, quantities of people who intended to go back home to celebrate the Spring Festival were halted for a long time. In addition, the disaster led to rapid price growth of daily necessities. The most important is that a great number of people died because of the heavy snow disaster.
      However, we can clearly see that national characteristics brought about in this disaster, so many people from all over the world went to the disaster area to try their best to help the local people. Some offered money, daily necessities, others help the people in danger live normally Almost everyone in China contributes his money to the disaster area, and lots of people were willing to help others no matter how the difficult it was. As a result, a few among whom died, just because of the brave behavior and respective spirit , we have defeated the disaster easily which has showed our national characteristics.

[ 本帖最后由 暴风雨骑士 于 2008-5-22 16:14 编辑 ]

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