老师，我的作文是这样的，能不能给我看看我能大概得多少分。
As can be seen from the story we can learn that there is no self-confidence,there is no success ,and we should keep self-confidence for life in different periods of life .Otherwise sad story such as the failed man mentioned in the story would hanppen.Only with the self-confidence ,we can improve ourselves step by step and make our life more colorful and meaningful.
There are a variety of reasons for this phenomenon.to begin with,one thing which is equally important to above mentioned is the change in social attitude towards self-confidence.wiht the development of society’s economy,self-confidence is becoming vital to all of us.Without confidence,any work can not successful.Moreover,there are a lot to do with the improvement of people’s living standard.With the elevation of living stand,the quality of life becoming increasingly important.They can find peasure from self-confidence and make contribution to society. in other words,more attention to_self-confidence has a positive effect on people’s life.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we should keep self-confidence for life in different periods of life so that we can make our life more successful and meaningful.
